A few things.
The breasts seem to be too high up and look like they're just floating there, not affected by gravity at all and her torso is too long and i know this could just be the shirt but her shoulders are too broad. Other than that a pretty nice piece.
true very true
I'm not going to give a full in-depth review, but here are a few notes.
Study anatomy, proportion, and your perspective needs just a bit of work, just keep practicing.
You're still young so I'll be nice and give it a 5/10
I like the way you did the background and the lighting (I need to work on my backgrounds myself) The only problem is the guy, (this might just be because I'm o.c.d about this kinda stuff sorry) The body of the character in the middle is off, this could be because of the coat but his arm looks like it isn't really there, and the muscle structure of the torso needs some work as well. The legs are almost right, you just need to show that they are actually hanging off the building a bit more, remember that the placement of the knee can show where the leg is elevated.
... Why does everyone think it's a guy.... ._.
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